I was not even 10 properly when I first met Skanda Rimal. I wasn't friends with her until we were 12 but we became best friends only when we were 15. I have always known her to be a character. She would make a perfect way towards any story.
A person I was eyeing on to be my character wrote her first story when she was 16. I remember because I proofread it. I remember because I was so happy to get messy but beautifully handwritten 8 pages of paper. She trusted me to critique her first story but my reactions to it back then were harsh.
Her story seemed like a first personal draft. I instructed her to rewrite it.
"It's a beautiful story but it's not written well."
That's what I told her 5 years ago. She never rewrote it, even if she did, I never got to read it. But what I have noticed in her, all these years is her willingness to learn . She is a living example behind the words, writing is a process.
She would ask me to correct her captions, ask for synonyms and the usage of words in a sentence. Her process started with Facebook captions, made its way to Instagram captions and now, she is writing more than just a sentence.
Her birthday wish for me felt special this year. "Did you write them on your own?" I even showed my skepticism but those beautifully crafted handful of words felt so perfectly put together, didn't feel like they were coming from my old friend.
I was left stunned the other day when I read the words written on her display picture. I read it twice before she asked me. "Why aren't you saying anything about my dp?" Because she knows how much I like beautiful things.
"Did you write it on your own?" This time I was more excited than skeptic.
It read:
"She fell in love. She fell in love with December. She fell in love with the fallen dried maple leaves, foggy morning,gloomy noon, orange dusk and breezy night, warm sweater, long boots and hot cup of coffee. But one day, like the other things in life, December left. December left like others but unlike other things it did return to her again."
Somewhere between the lines, I remember why I have always seen her as a character. Because like a hero, she refuses to give up. She puts an effort to move further and I know she won't stop until she finally succeeds.
Wednesday, 21 December 2016
Wednesday, 14 December 2016
24. Story Time
"Who lives in the cave, darling?" I asked with excitement.
"Nothing. You continue with what you saw." I encouraged his lie.
"But I don't understand, this baby dragon you talk about, was it the same size as Papa dragon?" I desperately wanted him to continue.
"There is an elephant?" At this point, I was genuinely interested.
"Nothing, so that's that right? A dragon, baby dragon, a lion, baby lion and elephant? Dragon dies and what about elephant? What happens to him?" He took few seconds before he spoke.
"You haven't been listening properly." He sounded upset. "Only elephant dies. Dragons don't die." He rolled his eyes.
"A big lion?" he seemed unsure. "And also his Papa." His looked away through the window.
"And?" I tried to distract him. "And there was also a dragon. He was small but strong. He could throw water from his mouth." He was adding details to the story, I smiled at the thought.
"Like Squirtle?" I quickly made the connection.
"Who?" He didn't know Pokemon.
"Nothing. You continue with what you saw." I encouraged his lie.
"They fought. Lion was very big. Dragon was small. Dragon lost and baby dragon cried." He sounded sad.
"There was also a baby dragon?" I was excited about this new character.
"Yes, yes. There was a baby dragon which was very small." He stopped telling the story.
"So that's it? That's all you saw?" I wanted to listen more of it.
"Yes." He said and smiled at me.
"But I don't understand, this baby dragon you talk about, was it the same size as Papa dragon?" I desperately wanted him to continue.
"Yes, about same. Baby dragon was growing fast you know, but it hadn't learnt to throw water from his mouth just yet." I tried my best not to correct him. I was only seconds away from bringing up fire when he continued.
"So this dragon dies and baby dragon cries. And Elephant attacks the baby dragon with its truck." His hands made a truck like symbol and he swept away everything from the table beside him. I made a face but didn't bother to rearrange the objects lying on the floor.
"There is an elephant?" At this point, I was genuinely interested.
"Of course." he rolled his eyes.
"The elephant attacked the baby dragon but Papa lion saved him because baby dragon was friends with baby lion." He was still looking outside the window. It looked like, he was trying really hard to remember.
"That was really sweet of him, hai? The Papa lion?" I asked him with smile.
"What?" he asked again.
"Nothing, so that's that right? A dragon, baby dragon, a lion, baby lion and elephant? Dragon dies and what about elephant? What happens to him?" He took few seconds before he spoke.
"He dies. Dragon and lion killed him together." He said it, simply.
"But wasn't dragon dead already?" He realized he had made a mistake but I liked how he didn't want to correct it.
"You haven't been listening properly." He sounded upset. "Only elephant dies. Dragons don't die." He rolled his eyes.
"Okay." I dare not ask anymore questions. However, I made the final confirmation. "That's all you saw in the cave?" He thought for a while.
"Yes.... Dijju, can I turn on the TV?" He was already running toward the living room.
"Sure, what do you want to watch?" I smiled picking up remote from the floor.
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